Hi everybody! Welcome back to my blog. I've now completed Literacy week 9 term 2. We've had to write about a closing statement, and what is a simple, compound and a complex is. At the bottom of the slide, we had to write about a description of what goes on at lunchtime at Ahipara school. We've also had to write about paragraphs and this is what I wrote so far!
Hi Punawai. You have done a great job putting information into your paragraphs this week. Paragraphs have plenty of detail and the ideas generally flow well. Don't forget that a paragraph doesn't need to tell the entire story. A paragraph only needs to focus on one particular aspect.
ReplyDeleteAlright, Thanks Miss O'Dea!
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