Great effort Punawai! You've completed the TOPS narrative structure for the selected stories very well. What type of storyline could you create using the picture of the boy flying in the box? What problem could he encounter and how would this be resolved? - Mrs T
Nice work Punawai. I like what you wrote about the different stories, I would love to hear what more about the boy in the flying box, and what else happened to them. I bet you could come up with some awesome ideas.
Great effort Punawai! You've completed the TOPS narrative structure for the selected stories very well. What type of storyline could you create using the picture of the boy flying in the box? What problem could he encounter and how would this be resolved? - Mrs T
ReplyDeleteNice work Punawai. I like what you wrote about the different stories, I would love to hear what more about the boy in the flying box, and what else happened to them. I bet you could come up with some awesome ideas.
ReplyDeleteThanks Rebecca for the feedback! And I will try add some more on the boy in the flying box.
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